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What if I march right up to you
Look you straight in the eye
What if I do that
And tell you what you told me so long ago
Would you believe me

Truth is
I'm not sure even I can

Would you even care
Did you ever

If I walk up to you and say
I still miss you
Would it matter
Would it make a difference

The truth is
I don't know if I really miss you

If I told you of my confusion
Would you make my mind clearer
Would you utter a word

If I asked you what changed
Would you shrug me off
Would you just walk away

Truth is....
You already have
11/2/11

What would you do?
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:iconmagicaljoey:
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011   Writer
You have a knack for writing poetry where the final line is almost an antithesis of the rest of the piece. Nice work though.
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nc1394 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
What exactly do u mean by that?
Thank you
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:iconmagicaljoey:
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011   Writer
Where the last line is an opposite. Like when in one of your other pieces the 'honesty' was a 'lie' - two opposites which you combined with grace to make one cracker of an ending.
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nc1394 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
oh ok..i see...One cracker of an ending? sorry not familiar with the expression :/
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:iconmagicaljoey:
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011   Writer
Sorry for the colloquialism. It means that you have a great ending.
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nc1394 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Writer
oh lol...thank you very much
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Joojie99 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
omg, this is like what I'm going through right now!
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nc1394 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
Did I read your mind? lol
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:iconjoojie99:
Joojie99 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student General Artist
almost! lol Pretty darn close. I love it :)
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nc1394 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
lol thank you :)
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